(Deutsche Bahn's) Delayed Trains by Sascha Ende

Hit or Miss? Arti’s Review

This track immediately grabs your attention with its raw energy and unapologetically gritty sound. It's got a definite punk rock spirit running through its veins, reminiscent of early indie bands tackling everyday frustrations with a healthy dose of sarcasm. The driving rhythm section lays a solid foundation, and the distorted guitars create a suitably edgy and slightly chaotic atmosphere, which, ironically given the potential title, isn't necessarily a bad thing. The vocal delivery is passionate and fits the overall rebellious vibe, even if it’s not the most polished performance technically.

From a production music perspective, this piece has a niche appeal. It's not going to be your go-to for sweeping orchestral scores or delicate piano ballads, but it carves out a space for projects needing a shot of rebellious energy or a soundtrack to urban angst. Think indie video games with a punk aesthetic, commercials aiming for a raw, authentic feel, or even podcast intros for shows that are a bit more confrontational or humorous. The lo-fi production style, while contributing to its character, could benefit from a slight tightening in the mix. The drums, for instance, could have a bit more punch without losing their raw edge, and the guitars could be sculpted to occupy their own space more distinctly. However, there's a certain charm in its slightly rough-around-the-edges nature that shouldn’t be completely erased, as it’s part of its unique character.

The arrangement is fairly straightforward, which, again, suits the punk rock style. It builds energy effectively and has a clear verse-chorus structure, making it easy to edit and loop for various media lengths. Perhaps exploring a slightly more dynamic bridge section could add another layer of interest and prevent it from feeling too repetitive over longer durations. Emotionally, it evokes a sense of frustration, impatience, and perhaps even dark humor. It's definitely not a feel-good track, but it's honest and relatable in its portrayal of everyday annoyances, which could resonate with audiences experiencing similar feelings.

Compared to industry-standard production music, this track stands out for its distinct personality and raw energy. While it might not have the pristine polish of some commercially-oriented libraries, it offers something different: authenticity and a genuine punk rock attitude. To further enhance its usability, consider offering instrumental versions, or even stems, allowing editors to fine-tune the mix and arrangement to fit specific scenes. Overall, this is a track with character and potential, particularly for projects seeking a raw, energetic, and slightly rebellious soundscape. With a few subtle production tweaks to enhance clarity and dynamics, it could become a valuable asset in a library specializing in edgier, more alternative music.

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LYRICS

[Verse 1]
I’m standing on the platform, freezing in the rain,
Another damn delay, it’s driving me insane!
The clock is ticking, but the train’s never here,
I swear they do it just to mess with my career!

[Pre-Chorus]
I’ve heard the lies, “We’re sorry for the wait,”
But I know the truth, this is my fate!

[Chorus]
Late again! The train’s never on time!
I’m stuck in this loop, losing my mind!
Late again! It’s always the same,
I swear these delays are part of the game!

[Verse 2]
I see the faces, the same ones every day,
Frustration in their eyes, got nothing left to say.
Crowded in like cattle, we’re all feeling trapped,
One more delay, man, I think I’m gonna snap!

[Pre-Chorus]
We’ve all had enough, this system’s a joke,
Our patience is gone, we’re ready to choke!

[Chorus]
Late again! The train’s never on time!
I’m stuck in this loop, losing my mind!
Late again! It’s always the same,
I swear these delays are part of the game!

[Bridge]
I can’t believe it, they call this “on track?”
When I get there, there’s no turning back!
Every excuse, I’ve heard them before,
Next time I’ll just walk out the door!

[Chorus]
Late again! The train’s never on time!
I’m stuck in this loop, losing my mind!
Late again! It’s always the same,
I swear these delays are part of the game!

[Outro]
Late again! Late again!
Sick of these delays, where does it end?
Late again! Late again!
When will the train show up, my friend?